Ceevro's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gomorrah - [pluto]]

Bass Nectar, anyone?

Not a bad start (you're looking for feedback, so I'm reviewing it as a work in progress). First, kill your lead instrument! The melody is right, the instrument is not. The deep bass beat you have going is done with HQ samples, but the lead makes it sound like an 8-bit piece. Second, keep that beat! It's awesome! Third, if I were you, I'd pull some speech samples...maybe political rallies or movie clips. This has that kind of epic, tense feel...Last, build a bridge. I know you're just starting on this, you've got a good verse. Needs chorus and bridge.

Hope that's helpful!

-Ceevro

GodBlock responds:

Yea I'm not overly happy with the sound of the lead but I like the melody, much appreciated comment.

[Dance of the Clouds]

Well arranged

You've got something thoroughly listenable here! Yes, you do need to fix the timing, which is noticably off, and perhaps add a couple timpany rolls as accents. Overall, a very pleasant and moreover GREAT for use by anyone doing screenplay work, tune. Keep doing this, and you'll do well!

whitesymphonia responds:

hmm, I'll follow ur advice with the timpani and address the timing. Also noted about
it in my reply to Pgtblink, that it is 3 on 4. but that I changed an instrument before so it could be off, i'll give it a check.

[Blades of Hattori Hanzo]

In a nutshell...

Well formulated...catchy...delivers all it says in the title! You have a winner here!

S3C responds:

Thank you sir

[(gaia) va4C 2nd muffin]

Hillarious!

Believable charachters, good background mixing, and the best version of the Hokey-Pokey I've ever heard!