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Ceevro

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Hmmmm...

I like the animation style. I was expecting to blam something, but this surprised me! I can't wait to see what you make happen with it!

Rowan159 responds:

gee, thanks! im working on my next project as we speak :D

HAHAHA!

That was awesome! The only thing I would say for improvements is to make the grab go a little quicker, to add to the shock value...

seAnceTM responds:

thanks, yeah i should of done that but the deadline made me cut off a lot of the story :/ but thanks a lot.

Well put together, but...

Great job of putting together the animation here. Well done, and meaningful! But hey...help us Audio Portal submitters out! We bust our butts putting out tunes for you to use, and you grab music that's already out there on the big scene...sigh.

I'm sure you'll pass judgment for this, though. The only thing I can really say artistically is that you need a better opening shot to really hook us viewers with ADD in!

Keep it up!

Regards,

Ceevro

lawlolawlstudios responds:

Thank you!

Ah yeah, I know. The Audio Portal is awesome, and I have contacted a number of users to get there music in my games, like I Am Archer and Autobox. This was originally a personal project that I didn't initially expect to upload to the internet. In other words, the song had meaning to me, etc.

Haha, understandable :P

Thanks again, man!

Chotto warui, desuyo!

Well, you did manage to sync the animation with the talking box. If that was your goal, you have achieved it, so you get two points. Other than that, it was incredibly boring, not funny (yes, I speak Japanese, and it sounds as though you got the dialogue out of a tourist handbook) and could use a plot or purpose for the VIEWER! Remember, there's nothing wrong with making a project for yourself to learn a technique. Just don't expect it to pass judgement if that's all it is. Make me something interesting. Watch TooF to learn how to make simple animation entertaining.

Deathwyrm responds:

I have looked up TooF, thank you for putting me onto it, I shall take lessons from it.

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