Ceevro's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[kait and the k b]

I don't know why, exactly...but this keeps me listening! It's like I need to know what's happening in the room!

sixshadowsix responds:

thank you lol i think

[Walkie talkie man remix]

Screwing around with a copyrighted song isn't your creation. Yeah, I get it, you've got a speed-control. Great. Make some music now.

yobro89 responds:

Hey, this was a test.

[Angels]

This is more like it. You know what this needs? A thunderstorm in the background. I want the sound of a heavy rain in a car being driven on the freeway! Excellent...put this one on your album...and make it longer!

ThaKidd responds:

Sure, that's a great idea. I'll do it when I get around to it

[One Day By Your Side]

Too compressed. Though the playing and instrumentation are good, you've got it so compressed that the whole thing feels like noise. Take the FX down a notch and repost this. It's worth doing some extra work on.

Mau3000 responds:

Gotcha.
Will be done, thanks. :)

[(Dont Inhale)Exhale(Inst)]

Straight solid work! You earned full-marks here! And I'm a hard-marker! I almost wanna start rapping...

Stavier responds:

Thanx mayne, I'm glad you respect my work :D

[Wanderstruck]

I can see why this got stuck in your head! This takes me back to quest-games and anime and running through the bushes with a stick-sword! Half-point loss on the flute-sound. Sorry, just sounds a little too fake...though I couldn't tell you how to fix it, short of getting a live flutist! Excellent overall work!

pftq responds:

It's actually a real flute sample - a chinese flute called a dizi. It was hard to work in though. Will keep working on that. Thanks!

[Gaseous Forms]

This reminds me of an RPG...music like this makes sure you know for a fact something REALLY shitty is about to land on your team! Point deduction for the lack of live guitars, and you could use a bridge to contrast. This has a lot of potential for a key-change!

Gustav21508 responds:

I'm not super versed in the guitar world, but I do see your point with having a bridge to contrast, and I'll have to add that in, and changing the key is a brilliant idea, I am always stuck between two keys because I adore them that much, but to move it, would probably be helpful to find a new harmony and such.
Thanks for the review, I'll get working on the live guitars ASAP. :)

[Pure of Heart]

Beautifully done!

This is some of the best orchestration I've heard on this site. You definitely don't need me to tell you that you know what you're doing!

Bosa responds:

I barely know what I'm doing, actually. I'm probably the worst composer on this website to be honest.

[Here it Comes (BigT)]

Not bad to start!

My first FL track wasn't nearly so good! I've since moved on to more live recording, but I've done the hours in front of the grey grid, so I know what went into this...

tay2von responds:

Yeaa man, lmao everyone has that first song they created using programs.... But the main thing that mattters is as long as you get good at it, and try to get better.

[Fifth Age Ambience [Complete]]

Simple...

You've mixed this well, but I feel like you're just following the beaten path. It just doesn't stick out. I think that a valuable question every artist has to ask themselves is; If you wanted to request this song, but didn't know the name, how would you tell the DJ what to play? If you can't give an answer, you have no hook.

Dumami responds:

This was a request for someone and they liked it. I have plenty of other tunes if you want to listen.