Love what you did with the saws!
This is awesome! To fix the empty bit, I find that it can be easy to use a very low-bass-buzz...if you're unsure of what notes to use, putting in the lowest possible zone can make the track a little more forgiving, and still fill it out nicely.
Not bad to start!
My first FL track wasn't nearly so good! I've since moved on to more live recording, but I've done the hours in front of the grey grid, so I know what went into this...
Yeaa man, lmao everyone has that first song they created using programs.... But the main thing that mattters is as long as you get good at it, and try to get better.
Great command of the genre!
You do this very well! Keep it up!
What was this?
There's nothing here to really comment on! Perhaps I'm just missing the subtle nuance of atonal minimalism, but really...
Good start...
You need a lead-line. Toss in a high-pitched instrument, like a flute or electric guitar to round this out. Other than that, it's just repetition. Like listening to a Bob Dylan guitar line, without Bob doing any singing. Even HE knew enough to pick up a harmonica when that happened!
Yeah... I have a tendency of not making lots of starts to songs and never actually finishing anything. I'm not so new, but I still don't reeeeeaaalllllyy know what u mean by lead-line
Well done...
Nothin' to complain about here! Not even my type of music, but I can appreciate the artistry!
Good base, but...
You've obviously got some musical ability, but the pad you chose as the background is...well...annoying. You've also got your levels WAY too high! Add some compression to even it out a bit.
Hehe, thanks for the help, I am quite new to this stuff so thanks a lot for telling me (:
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